And another thing It’s
not what you put in but what you leave out that
matters Paul Johnson
I recalled this conversation (from 1947) last week, when I was
writing an essay on T.S. Eliot for my book-in-progress on creative
people. Eliot, whom I once or twice had the thrill of meeting,
though he told me nothing — he was costive of his treasures or, as
the late John Raymond put it, ‘anally retentive’ — was a great man
for leaving things out. Indeed the wonder is that he ever put
anything in. His ‘The Waste Land’ (1922), which introduced modern
poetry into the English-speaking world just as surely as
Wordsworth’s and Coleridge’s ‘Lyrical Ballads’ (1798) introduced
Romantic poetry, though it seems so massive and formidable and is
divided into five parts, is actually only 434 lines. The ‘Four
Quartets’ is longer, though not by much. In the Faber edition of The
Complete Poems and Plays of T.S. Eliot, the poetry occupies only 236
pages.
‘The Waste Land’, when it appeared not long after the end of the
first world war, the same year as Ulysses, D.H. Lawrence’s Aaron’s
Rod and Sinclair Lewis’s Babbitt, to put it in context, was a
thunderbolt which left the literary landscape changed for ever, not
because it was a literary success, for the notices were mixed, but
because the intelligent young took it to their hearts straight away.
The reasons they did so were manifold. The poem was pessimistic but
smartly and fashionably so. It was post-Einstein and post-Freud. It
was subtly and tantalisingly sexual, hinting but giving nothing away
(not surprisingly, since Eliot was still a virgin, albeit in his
mid-thirties). It had jazz rhythms, hints and more than hints of
demotic speech, though it also appealed strongly to the intellectual
and academic mind, with its oblique references and quotations and
its pretentious footnotes, a con trick of which Eliot was later
ashamed. But the real and fundamental reason why it appealed to
clever young men and women was that it made them co-creators. He
left out things and bade readers fill them in. It ‘stimulated them
to supply what is not there’.
For this, I think, Eliot had to thank not only himself and his
natural costiveness, but Ezra Pound. Pound was not (in my view) a
great poet and he seems to have been a most unpleasant individual.
But to Eliot he was a godsend. When they met in London and Eliot
showed him his work, Pound immediately recognised a master-poet, and
thereafter poured over the difficult and unsure young man the
supercharged encomiums he desperately needed, and gave him the
self-confidence he conspicuously lacked. Moreover, when presented
with the text of ‘The Waste Land’ he edited it, cutting a lot of
meretricious and pretentious verbiage and stripping it down to its
drumbeat rhythms and pure music, making it tantalisingly spare and
increasing the temptation of the reader, whom Eliot himself had
already invited to join in the creative act by fleshing out the
inferences and innuendos. This collaboration of Eliot and Pound,
albeit one-sided, was just as creative as the astonishing alliance
between Wordsworth and Coleridge in west Somerset. Eliot became at a
stroke the head of the poetic profession, a position he held till
his death in 1965. It was omissions, reticence and silence which did
the trick.
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