   Issue: 27 November
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| And another thing It’s
not what you put in but what you leave out that
matters Paul Johnson
In the art of writing, one of the central problems is what to put
in and what to leave out. In the past, I have always been one for
putting in. I felt myself full of good things I did not want the
reader to miss. So my books got longer and longer. This gigantism
spent itself, and from the gross satisfaction of putting everything
in I turned to the more delicate pleasure of deciding what to leave
out. I discovered I could write down everything a reasonable person
needed to know about the Renaissance in 40,000 words, and I have
since done Napoleon and Washington at the same length. It has proved
to be great fun.
It is one thing, however, to leave out material for reasons of
space, bulk, balance and other physical causes, quite another to
leave out for reasons of art. That is one of the great mysteries and
problems — and delights — of creation. One great artist who knows
exactly what to leave out and what to put in is Jane Austen. When I
went up to Oxford I had read only Pride and Prejudice, and thought
it quite good, but had no present plans to move further into her
oeuvre. Then, through the good offices of my sister, a don at St
Anne’s, I was invited to have tea — I am not sure it was not ‘to
take tea’ — with Miss Mary Lascelles at Somerville. Miss Lascelles
was from a grand Yorkshire family and most particular about manners,
and I went with some trepidation. She was also a woman of remarkable
sensibilities and acute intelligence. A few years before, in 1939,
she had published a striking work, Jane Austen and Her Art, which
more than 60 years later is still the best book written on the
subject. One reason for this is that Miss Lascelles, like Jane
Austen, was a lady, and therefore perceived certain hesitations,
reticences, lacunae and other subtleties which, say, a Bloomsbury or
Maida Vale bluestocking, or an American female professor, no matter
how clever, will not catch. Over the Lapsang Souchong and Fuller’s
walnut cake (which then still existed; its extinction is one of the
minor tragedies of my lifetime), Miss Lascelles soon got down to
business, and there was only one business in her life. ‘Have you
read all the novels, or just some, and if so, which?’ I confessed,
only Pride and Prejudice. ‘Ah yes. The funniest, perhaps — the
author herself said so, but not by any means the best.’ She then
conjured me most earnestly to make myself master of Jane Austen’s
entire slender output at the earliest possible opportunity.
‘Because, you know, a thorough familiarity with Jane Austen’s work
is the greatest passport to human happiness in the world that I
know, and the richest gift of divine providence. And the earlier you
acquire it, the longer there will be for enjoyment. Those novels are
precious jewels to be carried through life, to sparkle and, unlike
mere diamonds, to warm our senses and gladden our hearts, at all
seasons but especially in times of trouble and distress, in sickness
and in pain, in bereavement and low spirits, on all occasions when
the world seems harsh and grim. Oh, Mr Johnson, I beg you to follow
my advice!’ Well, in due course I did — not immediately, for there
were wine, women and song to be relished first — but when I went
into the army. And of course she was right, and everything she said
proved to be true, as I have learnt over the past half-century. So I
beg readers who have not yet acquired that thorough familiarity to
do so with all deliberate speed. On that same occasion, Miss
Lascelles quoted to me an observation of Virginia Woolf (which also
occurs in her book on p. 134). Mrs Woolf called Jane Austen ‘a
mistress of much deeper emotion than appears upon the surface. She
stimulates us to supply what is not there.’ Miss Lascelles added,
‘It is a mark of a great writer that he or she takes the reader into
the magic circle of composition, and gets you to join them in the
art of creation. You supply what is not there. And what you supply
is to some extent of your own choosing, though to be sure within the
parameters of the author’s intentions. The supreme gift of
authorship is to make the reader his co-creator. Shakespeare had
this gift. So did Jane Austen. And so does that remarkable Mr Eliot
who is astonishing us with his “Four Quartets”.’
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